Lolita D. Due. [ready for review =P]

[reii]

[i'm in bad humour right this minuet, but I'l give it a shot.]

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The name is Charlotte Dearg Due.
Others call me Lolita.
I have survived here for 26 years.
There's no doubt I am a Female.
My place in this world is a Watchman.

SPECIES
Nekomata.
She's based off this species and since it's not a well known one, I've messed about it with it a bit.
Lolita has cat ears and tail and pointed teeth, but is otherwise quite human like. Her eyes change colour depending on her mood.


** User of the DARK element.


WHEN I LOOK IN THE MIRROR...
Long silver hair, down past her waist. This is often tied up with a length of ribbon while she fights. She has black, fluffy ears and tail. Her eyes are usually red or blue. She's five foot, two inches tall (not including ears). Her skin is pale (as she can't be in sunlight.) Slightly muscular build, but still light and overly good-looking.
She usually dresses in long black (or dark, rich colours) full length dresses. Don't mistake this for modesty, the chest line is usually cut low. They are usually cut in such a fashion that, she can easily tear at them to make it more mini-skirt like (and thus allow herself to fight with martial arts).

ABILITIES [ho-hum?]

• Shadow Puppets.
  Creatures, which generally look like cats, form in shadows and she can use them to spy on people and creep them out. Not very useful in battle.
  
• She can mezmorize people to some extent (but she's not good at it.]
  
• Martial Arts. She's pretty good at 'em.
  

DISABILITIES

• Light (even just daylight) causes her pain.
  
• Easily Distracted. Her attention span is pretty weak and bringing up some gossipy topic (espically if she's concerned!) will easily throw her.
  
• Water.
  

MY OWN PERSON...
Her personality, like her eye colour varies. Usually she keeps a perky, sadistic front, often acting filtatious or catlike depending on who it is and how she's really feeling.
Really she often feels annoyed at herself for various reasons. This can motivate her to get jobs done and to keep going though, and it wouldn't be like her to dwell and sulk on matters for too long. Even if their bothering her, she usually tries to keep going and think about it on the move.
She'll often start fights or cause problems for others either to forget about her own problems, as a side effect of them or in a fit of rage.

She won't admit to it, but she's proud, stubborn and persistent. But bleh bleh blah. I have reasons for it D<

LIKES

• Arawn
  
• Fish
  
• Fighting
  

DISLIKES

• Losing.
  
• Losing.
  
• Losing.
  
• People who are more successful then her.
  
• (sun)light
  
• Utter aloneness.
  

THE STORY OF MY PAST...
Born into wealthy and high positioned family. Family killed in feud. Ran off and learnt martial arts and mastered Dark powers. Returned, revenged family, exists.

[short, but will that general idea work? if so, I'll develop, if not, scratch and start again.]


SAMPLE OF THE WORKS...
"I'm being serious."Lolita simply replied. She could clearly see he was trying to wind her up; push her buttons. She also saw that he wasn't going to help her out if they just kept playing with each other's words. The time for jokes was over. "Please, don't think of yourself so highly."She replied to his second comment, her look haughty, her voice unimpressed. She was a greater demon and one of high class and position in the Netherworld. She ruled. Literally. She wasn't going to sink to his level so easily... just yet.

K:anode nodded in agreement to what Colby said. He was completely straight and he didn't need anyone questioning it! There was no reason for it!

Lolita however, raised an eyebrow.
"Huh. You think?"She asked, looking K:anode over. She didn't think so. She only half listened to what Colby was saying. She found it amusing that he even bothered to justify not liking K:anode, if he was so sure of his straightness and she had no idea who the latter person he described was. She shrugged it off.

"Not that this conversation hadn't been.... interesting, can we get back to the point?"She asked, getting more serious. She had her "Leader" face on. She stood up straight, now clearly taller then K:anode, by a good 6 inches if you counted her ears.

"Yes, which is you leave me -us alone."K:anode interrupted angrily, turning on his heel and starting on the stairs.

"So now it's "us" heh?"Lolita muttered. "My, my, how quickly things do change..."

Again K:anode blushed, but he ignored her. "Come on Colby, she's not worthy of the time."

[a mixture of Lottie and my other character, K:anode, but the best I can find right now.


EXTRAS...
*other here

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[Ready for Review = Ready for pointers, though it's not finished yet.]

[Miss Fifi]

Some things you must fix to be accepted:

• You need a Rank. There's a link to the Ranks in the sidebar.
  
• Appearance and Personality must be in paragraph form. A minimum of one seven-sentence paragraph is required
  
• Your element goes where it says ELEMENT.
  
• I would suggest adding more to your History, but you do not have to since it is optional.
  
• RP Sample obviously.
  
• 3 Abilities, 3 Disabilities minimum.
  

I'll look it back over when you've made the changes.

[reii]

I didn't add to the history (this is not the kind of world she's from, so I don't want to mess it up while I'm still developing it. [most of her history is set in hell, but I doubt I can use that.])

Other then that, sorted.

[Miss Fifi]

Governess is not available for your element at this time, but the person who has the position has been very inactive. I'm going to perform an Activity Check within the next few days and if they don't respond you're welcome to have the position. For now we can just leave your rank as Watchman~